Rejected PS4 Parkour

[Mr_Gamer_Kid]

Mr_Gamer_Kid
PS4 Parkour

Plot #: 3:-63
Easy
34 jumps
About me: I'm just a boy playing streaming minecraft for fun. I'm trying to become better at parkour and building. So yeah!

 

[Dubinzi]

I'm giving this a -1.
Positives:

• Jumps are varied so it does not feel repetitive

Negatives:

• The theme is not original, there are already many many console and PC maps
• the jumps pretty much don't interact with the build at all, they're all just floating
• Floating jumps makes the map look messy
• The build is not detailed enough,

Suggestions:

• Make the build much better and clearly recognizable as a PS4
• Make the jumps interact with the build for most, if not all of the course
• Remove as many floating jumps as possible

Overall, the theme is not original enough, and for that reason I don't think this will be accepted, even if it is fixed. If I were you I would try a different, more original theme.

Good luck with your future maps, and I hope to see more submissions from you.

 

[Luci]

Hey Mr_Gamer_Kid! Unfortunately I have to give this map a -1. Although as Dubinzi said, the jumps are varied, they also are a little too hard for an easy mode. The build itself could be better and it’s a bit messy. Either way, good luck!

 

[k_rissy]

I'm also gonna give this a -1. The theme isn't original, and it seems like the PS4 is not the main focus. As Luci said, the build is messy. Believe me, I know the PS4 is oddly shaped, so it's hard to create, but be more careful and add more details, should you end up submitting another map in the future.

I wish you the best of luck! <3

 

[Shinxray]

Hoi Mr_Gamer_Kid,
I'm gonna close your submission because I can't found your map, please resubmit with the good coords next time !