Rejected Pumpkin Boss - Medium

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Username: Zax_kc
Map name: Pumpkin Boss
Plot: /plot tp Zax_kc
Number of jumps: Approx. 60
Checkpoints: 3
Difficulty: Medium

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Hello,

Unfortunately, your map submission has been REJECTED. Here is my input:

Theme: The theme is not original as we do already have a Minecraft pumpkin-themed map (Pumpkin). Be sure to check the Parkour List before building your map to make sure that it is an original idea!
Build: The build had a good amount of block variety and detailing, so nice job. It was also very accurate to the theme, and I like the organics of the arms. I would've liked to see the pumpkin be more of a natural shape instead of the blocky Minecraft pumpkin, as Minecraft maps are pretty easy to build (as most of them are just cubes).
Parkour: The parkour was the proper length of a MEDIUM map, but it was a bit too easy. I recommend making most of the jumps harder, as well as increasing the variation of your jumps - you did have a nice amount of different blocks used, but your parkour would be better if you added jumps with trapdoors, anvils, heads, lily pads, flower pots, etc.

I'd love to see more map submissions from you in the future, and have a great day!
 
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