Hello dogsteef and Mfenix,
I regret to inform you that your map is being
rejected.
The theme is
original, well done.
The build is
accurate to what you were going for, with some nice details/texturing to be seen.
The parkour is the main concern. Overall, it would honestly need to be overhauled. This map is
not fun to play at all in 1.18/other higher versions. There is an abundance of pane blockages, which is one example of jumps difficult in these higher versions. There are also some sharp turns, precise slimes, and a cross neo that all do not belong on a medium map. If you need specific jumps to change, you may message me, but it does end up being a majority of the map. The path overall feels quite clunky as well. To correct these issues, you need to:
-Get rid of most of the pane blockages
-Heavily nerf the parkour (Check this thread for tips:
https://manacube.com/threads/basics-nerfing-buffing-pk-general-tips.78981/)
-Test in 1.18
Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!