Hello unspeakable_josh,
I regret to inform you that your map has been
rejected.
The theme is unoriginal as we already have many maps based around quartz and wonderlands. Please read this doc
here to see all our accepted maps.
For the build it lacked a lot of shape (very boxy), try to make a build that has more shape and gives the parkour more life. This just goes back to the theme you chose. It is hard to make a creative and unique build for the theme you chose so you might want to consider changing your theme which can better fit a big build.
[ty Jacob]
With the parkour, it's quite inconstant. Due to the 3 block ceiling some jump are harder. Not only this, two of your head hitter fence jumps are impossible. Ensure that your map is possible before submitting it. Some parts feel like a medium map and others like a hard map but for the most part, the parkour is too easy for an expert map. The parkour is lacking variance, the only jumps you have are normal jumps and fences. Try to add more variance such as heads, glass panes, water, etc to make the parkour more enjoyable and less repetitive.
We hope to see more maps from you in the future.
Have a good day/night
-Hayley