Hi there,
First of all, there are a lot of "Rainbow" themed parkours, making the theme of your map very unoriginal. In addition to this, in my opinion, the map looks a little messy. Although I have not tested this map, I can clearly see from the photos you have provided that there is not a big variety of jumps, as I can only see ladders, and solid blocks, but the parkour does look fun. However, I do think if you modify a few things this would be an ok map, but unfortunately I doubt it will get accepted due to the theme. -0
Good luck,
Allie