Rejected Rats - Easy

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RATS

THESE ARE GOOD RATS!

5 Checkpoints

43 Jumps

Easy

My 11th plot on map maker world

Behind the huge black room

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peachay

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Hi there,
First of all the rats look a bit strange in my opinion, to be honest they look more like toads. However, I like the design of the map, the parkour variety looks good but I'm not a fan of the rats. The design is simple but overall attractive and I do not recall seeing a map with the same/similar theme.
Furthermore I will be giving this map a +0 , but if you change those creepy rats I will review my rating. :p
Good luck :)
 

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Hi there,
First of all the rats look a bit strange in my opinion, to be honest they look more like toads. However, I like the design of the map, the parkour variety looks good but I'm not a fan of the rats. The design is simple but overall attractive and I do not recall seeing a map with the same/similar theme.
Furthermore I will be giving this map a +0 , but if you change those creepy rats I will review my rating. :p
Good luck :)
:) they look fine to me i might change them up a little idek
 

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:) they look fine to me i might change them up a little idek
If you are thinking to change something change the eyes, that is what make em look range, they are not proporcionate, but anyway good job.
 

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noah making a course based off of yourself is pretty narcissistic. plus you didnt mod me on your live stream so -1
 

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Hello Noah,

I am here to inform you that this course is being rejected. While I do not think the build looks horrible, it could use a few improvements. Also, the parkour isn't very fun or interesting. It's quite repetitive and some of the jumps aren't allowed on easy courses. Also, in certain areas of the course, barriers interfere with the parkour. Overall, the build could be improved, the parkour isn't very fun or interesting, the parkour is repetitive, and barriers interfere. However, I do like the idea you were going for! The theme is mostly original, as I cannot recall a "Rat" course in the Parkour world. :)

Thank you for submitting this course! I hope to see more from you in the future! :)
If you have any questions, you can PM me on here, in game, or on discord

-Ashley (ThePKFish, fishy1980)
 
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