Rejected Resubmission: Mjolnir - Easy

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PineappleRyann

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  • Mjolnir
  • 70;3 or /plot v PineappleRyann
  • Easy (1 checkpoint not including the one at the spawn)
  • 23 Jumps
  • Made jump changes, and put more jumps on the actual build itself
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Hey PineappleRyann,

I'm very very sorry to have to tell you that your map has been REJECTED yet again. The theme, as stated before, is definitely original as there are no thor or Mjolnir related maps, well done! The build is simple, attractive, and definitely depicts thor's Mjolnir accurately. The only issue is the parkour. Although we see that you attempted to integrate it into the build more and decreased the number of floating jumps, the parkour lacked variation. It was very repetitive, mostly consisting of ladder jumps. We love your build, it'd be a shame to let it go to waste. All you need to do is make the parkour more varied and fun and it would 100% get accepted. We await your re-submission :)


p.s There were major skips on the map, you should definitely implement barrier blocks to prevent these.
 
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