Rejected Resubmit - Crisps

Status
Not open for further replies.

Mika

Forum Expert
ELITE
qMika
qMika
ELITE
Joined
Aug 5, 2019
Posts
266
Ratings
183 5
#1
Builder : xMika
Helper : Cuyyy
Map Name : Crisps
Checkpoints : 5
Jumps : ~65
Difficulty : Hard
/plot tp xMika 2
 

Attachments

Last edited:

Cuyyy

Active Member
MVP
SkeppyShopDotCom
SkeppyShopDotCom
MVP
Joined
Jan 4, 2018
Posts
26
Ratings
7 2
#2
And by the way: If you go to /plot tp xMika 2
You can also look from the top and it says Crisps.
 

Tas

Member
ELITE
ManaLabs
ManaLabs
ELITE
Joined
Nov 2, 2017
Posts
1,620
Ratings
1,315 43
#3
Decent theme (food is unoriginal but chips is fine) build is good except he bag which is a bit messy imo, but the bowl and chips are good, and the parkour looks good.

I think this map should be accepted, good luck!
 

Smxthie

Forum Expert
ELITE
smxthie
smxthie
ELITE
Joined
May 25, 2017
Posts
431
Ratings
604 49
#4
Hey xMika

Sad to say this map is going to be rejected!

The theme is decent like tas said above, food is unoriginal but chips are fine
The build isn't attractive in my opinion due to the fact that in my opinion (and others) it doesn't really resemble chips in our opinions. to me, they look more like bananas!
The parkour is also very, interesting. there are a few original jumps but for the most part, they're pretty mundane and boring jumps such as 3 blocks and up 1, neos and ladder jumps.

Thanks for submitting the map! and we hope to see more from you in the future!

Have a wonderful Day/Night
-Nick
 
Status
Not open for further replies.