Rejected Robot Legacy - Expert

[nelwy_]

Builder: nelwy_
Parkour Builder: BlurpyFied
Map name: Robot Legacy
Plot: /plot tp nelwy_ 2
Difficulty: Expert
Number of jumps: 81
Checkpoints: 8

Screenshots:


Description:

The ancient ruins of a once mighty robot lie before you, now nothing more than a petrified husk. Yet despite its seemingly lifeless state, a strange power seems to pulsate within its metallic frame. As you approach, you can see that some of its parts are still in remarkably good condition, as if time has had no effect on them. It's as if the robot is still alive, somehow suspended between life and death. As you get closer, you can feel the power emanating from the ruins growing stronger, as if the ancient machine is stirring to life once again...

Informations about the build:

This robot was created thanks to an Original Concept Art from Alexander Trufanov (photo n°1)
I then made a 3D model (photo n°2) from his concept (2 years ago) that I used as my main reference.

If you need more informations about that, feel free to leave a comment and I'll come back to you asap.

 

[woolly26]

+1 would recommend

 

[Shinxray]

Hey nelwy_ and Blurpyfied,
Sorry to tell you that your map has been rejected.
The theme is cool, while there is already some robot/mecha maps (RedstoneMonstrosity, iRobot, AT-ST etc), your map is different enough to be original.
The build is okay, while I think the overall shape is very cool, I think the color palette could be improved, as it looks very messy (seems like a //set [block 1], [block2], [...]), I suggest that you make the colors more smooth by using only 1 or 2 blocks for the whole build, and use darker/lighter gray shades on darker/lighter parts. But overall like I said, it's good.
The parkour is not very good in my opinion, I think it's a bit too hard on some parts for an expert (mostly the very first checkpoint for example), and I think the map was overall not fun. (Giving you screenshots of jumps I found annoying in a spoiler after, but I think overall the map was annoying). I also think the parkour is a bit confusing sometimes, and I think it would be cool adding something here and not just a very long walk. Try fixing the jumps on the screenshots, but if possible, I would suggest redoing the pathing of the map, as some part a bit cramped which could be a reason why I think the parkour was annoying.

Spoiler: screenshots

Thanks for submitting your map.
-Shinx