Hello ChuckCharlie_ and Mlaudadio,
I regret to inform you that your map is being
rejected.
The theme is
unoriginal, as we already have several maps relating to castles. Before creating a map, please make sure that the theme has not already been done before by checking the map list
here.
The build is a concern. Overall, the map looks quite
messy at present with all of the structures being spread quite far apart. If you use multiple structures in a build,
try to group them closer together. In addition, floating islands are an unoriginal build concept, so
try to avoid them as much as possible. The structures themselves also
need more detail throughout.
The parkour is
repetitive within each section, so
make sure you have some varied parkour throughout your entire map! The difficulty of this parkour is also quite
inconsistent, overall feeling too tricky for a medium map.
Here are some threads made by some of our community judges/mappers that can help you:
https://manacube.com/threads/basics-nerfing-buffing-pk-general-tips.78981/
https://manacube.com/threads/basics-parkour-variance-and-self-constraint.78459/
https://manacube.com/threads/basics-show-dont-tell-how-to-path-good-signage-and-directions.78219/
Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!