Rejected Sandy - Hard

[Toastedtim]

Sandy

Builder : ToastedTim
ID : /plot v ToastedTim 1
Difficulty : Hard (I think)
Number of Jumps : 75

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I went for a sand themed map which consists of sand related things like cactus, sand village, and both red and white sand. I asked some players to play it and the reviews were positive but I took the comments and improved on them so I hope you enjoy.

 

[r3dstraw]

The Theme is Unoriginal
because there are alot of Sand themed maps.
Also The Build is not really good and doesn't look interesting.
Try To add some more Details.
there is suppose to be a main build in the map.
The Parkour is Not good And the map is super Messy
because of the Floating Jumps.
The Parkour is also a Bit Confusing.

I Wish You Good Luck! :)

 

[Shinxray]

Hoi ToastedTim,
Sorry to tell you that your map have been rejected.
EzGirlPvP_X already said a lot, the theme is unoriginal because there is already some Sand maps, the build is not really attractive, the reason is it's really messy, because there is a lot of floating blocks, try to make your parkour on/in a main build, and not around like you did. The parkour is not really good too, it's a bit varied, but still pretty repetitive (A lot of normal jumps), there is also a little exploit here : http://prntscr.com/mk2huo

Thanks for submitting your map, would be really good to see more maps from you !