Rejected Sea Block Parkour

[ThePizzaCastle]

Hello!
I had a tiny bit of Trouble Making Screenshots for you, but I managed to get at least one!
my IGN: is "ThePizzaCastle" and this build is on my plot.
I only made one spot for a checkpoint since it would be harder if there is only one!
(It is on Top of the First Ladder Tower)
I would say that my parkour course is Either "Easy" or "Medium"

(Fully Up to You!)
This is my first time making a thread on this so sorry if I am missing stuff!
The Theme for My Parkour is "Sea Blocks" and it is fun!
I used NO REDSTONE on this Map, and made a ending location for it to end!
(On the 2nd Ladder Tower)
Thanks for Reading!
-Pizzaaaa ^-^

 

[zootbot]

I just realised how many parkours need to be looked at
Its Crazy!!!

 

[Pud96]

first This map does not fill good it need more sea builds is not good if you want you can look other mappers build they are good :3

 

[PrestonTheSlime]

Hello Pizza,
Your map has been Rejected for the following reasons:
-The theme was lacking, the build used 3 main blocks and had no detail.
-There weren't many different types of parkour
-It was a lot of floating blocks. Try integrating your parkour with the build more
What you can improve on:
-Build Theme
-Build Detail
-Integration of Theme and Jumps
-Adding more types of parkour
If you wish to re-submit this map after improving it feel free to do so.
~Preston