Rejected Seasons Parkour

[TheFluttershy]

Hi! I would like to submit a map called Seasons Parkour. As I said in an earlier post I cannot get to my screenshots on my computer so just do /warp SeasonsParkour in Creative to get to it.

Info:
32 Jumps
I think it should be an Easy Parkour
Bye!
TheFluttershy

 

[DaTNTBoy]

I could finish the parkour in 15 Jumps.
This parkour is too short

 

[TheFluttershy]

I agree. I will improve it tomorrow.

 

[Billybo10000]

Sadly your map has been rejected!

Reasons for this include:

The map is too small. It feels like everything has been jammed into such a small section of parkour, that it makes it tough to look nice. The design is really weak in some areas, it doesn't feel completely natural, and the idea of the different seasons doesn't always come across. While winter was obvious, Spring Summer and Autumn did not come across well enough.

Remember, you can always submit new maps at a later date,

Thank you for your submission,
~ Billy