Hey Bun,
I am sorry but I am going to be rejecting this map submission.
The theme you chose to do is really good and original for our droppers, however I do not think it was presented very well. You can easily get to the bottom by only moving a couple blocks. Nothing to block you. Personally I would work on the theme and the builds as then it would be better.
Thank you for submitting, I hope to see more in the future!