Rejected Shiny!-Easy

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LovelyLing

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My username is Liingling and my map name is Shiney! This is my second plot and i think this map is an easy map. There are about 30 jumps. I will post a picture that I was trying to recreate.
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Hello Liingling,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is original, as we currently don't have any maps from "Moana," so good job on that!
The build is somewhat accurate to the original character design, and there is quite a bit of block variety throughout, so good job on that! However, it does feel a bit flat compared to the original character.
The parkour has a little bit of variety throughout, but it gets repetitive in certain sections, so please try to incorporate different jump styles throughout the entire map! The parkour is also floating a bit (meaning it isn't attached to the build) which can make it look messy. I also think you should try to place some parkour on the outside of your build. The difficulty and length of the course both fit the easy difficulty quite nicely, so good job on that!

Thank you for submitting your map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina
 
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