Rejected Soap Dispenser - Donator Hard

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Soap Dispenser - Donator Hard
/plot home blurpyfied 9 (towards the back btw)
made by: blurpyfied
10 checkpoints
63 jumps
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Hello,

I regret to inform you that your map is REJECTED.

The THEME of your map is original, but the theme isn't the best for a map.

The BUILD of your map is a problem. The build doesn't resemble a soap dispenser, and without knowing the theme I wouldn't have been able to put it together. On a more good note, you have gotten alot better with adding details and texturing!

The PARKOUR fits the length and difficulty of a hard map, so good job on that! Your parkour was very confusing, try adding more directional signs to help it flow more smoothly. The pathing is also weird, it kind of seems squished. While the parkour did have some creative moments, it still felt a bit repetitive in some moments especially with glass panes.

Thank you for taking the time to create a map, I hope to see more submissions from you in the future.
If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555
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