Rejected Spirited Away- Medium

[EssiTessi]

Map by EssiTessi, Parkour by Khirina
This map is based on the Spirited Away characters Haku ( in his dragon form ) and Chihiro.
/plot visit EssiTessi 3
It is a medium map
42 jumps, 2 checkpoints

 

[Tas]

I'm really disappointed to say that there is already a Haku map. It's called Haku, Hard difficulty. It's too bad, because this version looks really great (ours didn't have Chihiro). Make sure your theme is original before you start building! :(

 

[EssiTessi]

I'm really disappointed to say that there is already a Haku map. It's called Haku, Hard difficulty. It's too bad, because this version looks really great (ours didn't have Chihiro). Make sure your theme is original before you start building! :(

Wow I was not aware of that lol. I edited my map to include other spirited away characters, so hopefully that could make it more original.

 

[IPattyI]

Hey EssiTessi,

Unfortunately, I will be REJECTING this map submission.

• Theme: As Tas mentioned above, there is already a "Haku" map currently on the server. Although you did add Chihiro and other miniature versions of the characters in the movie, I still don't think it's enough to make the map original. It's a very lamentable situation :/ .
• Build: The build is pretty decent if we disregard the fact that the Haku build looks very similar to the one we already have on the server. It definitely looks like what you were going for, has good detailing/shaping, and the parkour was integrated well. But, I did have some issues with the build besides its unoriginality. Haku's length was not dealt with as great as possible and the faces of all the characters are pretty bland.
• Parkour: The PK length and difficulty definitely fit the medium difficulty. But, I think adding a checkpoint would definitely make the map more playable. I did notice you tried your best to make the parkour as varied as possible, I appreciate that. For the most part, it was. Yet, I still felt like some jumps were kind of repeated.

I hope you take these criticisms into consideration when submitting maps in the future, good luck!