Rejected Steampunk Dream | Hard

[Tufart_59]

o°O Mapper : Tufart_59 O°o

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°oO Name : SteamPunk Dream Oo°
° The map's theme is mainly "Dream" °​

0* Pictures : *0

http://imgur.com/a/rc7x5oK

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Jumps : 51
Checkpoints : 3
Difficulty : Hard

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/plot v Tufart_59 2 to view it !​

 

[Tas]

Your builds are breathtaking and your parkour is excellent. It's so unfortunate that your themes are unoriginal. Steampunk and tower maps will never be accepted :(

 

[Tufart_59]

Your builds are breathtaking and your parkour is excellent. It's so unfortunate that your themes are unoriginal. Steampunk and tower maps will never be accepted :(

Ce n'est pas seulement du steampunk, c'est un rêve steampunk :p (pour moi ca fait une difference)

 

[Tas]

Ce n'est pas seulement du steampunk, c'est un rêve steampunk:p(pour moi ca fait une difference)

We'll see!

 

[Aztec]

The build looks extremely well done and is all around something amazing to add to the parkour list. I would love to see this in game one day.

 

[sapqhire]

Hello Tufart_59,

Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The 'Steampunk' theme isn't original, as there are already multiple maps with this theme. Please read over this thread https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/ to make sure your map idea is original. The build is really good. It is simple, yet detailed and overall really attractive to look at, so well done!
The parkour is quite varied in places, but there were a few sections that seemed a little repetitive, with mainly normal blocks. Try to experiment with a larger variety of blocks and items to keep the consistency of variation and original jumps throughout the entire map.
Most of the parkour is floating. Try to avoid having too many jumps floating over the build and the void, as this can make the map look quite messy. Try to incorporate the jumps into the build where possible.
The length is possibly a bit short, but could suit a hard map, and the difficulty suits a medium/hard map.

Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.