Hey KillZone18BG,
I am sorry to tell you, but I am going to reject this map. That does not mean you cannot fix the issues and resubmit it.
I personally do not see the theme directly. Try to add definetly more details fitting to the theme, so you can see the theme without reading signs. The sign only should be an addition. Also the jumps are really easy and a few ones are skipable. Try to fix these issues for sure, before resubmitting.
Thank you for submitting and I hope to see more in the future!
Shron