Rejected SuperHateMeWorld - Expert / Insane?

[Necrocide]

So hi, I'm Necrocide, and I've currently built a map called SuperHateMeWorld. This is very annoying to play and pretty hard imo. This is a solo project that I built as soon as I joined the server. It took me a short time of about 40 minutes and it is currently on my plot #2. This is probably gonna get rejected considering it is very trash if I'm going to be honest to myself. Here is a photo of it:

Enjoy!



Also if there is something a bit too hard just feel free to nerf some parts.

 

[Necrocide]

so i looked at a few submissions and turns out mine is def getting rejected considering the rejected ones are more detailed and still didn't get in so uh this is gonna be a problem since im trash at building with no friends that play mc xd

 

[xenobite]

Since this has zero theme or build and very repetetive parkour you are probably right lmao
I recommend taking a look at this

Edit: linked the wrong thing

 

[PyroTortilla]

Hello,

Unfortunately, your map submission is being REJECTED. Here is my input:

Theme: The theme is not great as it is too broad - think of a more specific theme for you to create a central build around instead of theming your map around annoying parkour.
Build: The build was very plain, especially from the outside. Try to create a main build that is well-detailed and looks pretty from the outside as they are visible from other maps. Try to incorporate more block variety instead of using all nether brick/lava/red stained glass.
Parkour: The parkour felt pretty short for an EXPERT map - make sure it ranges from 80-100 jumps. The parkour was also very repetitive and boring (I mean the map ended with like 32 double neos in a row) - try to incorporate more blocks/variety into your parkour with jumps that include things like heads, flower pots, vines, doors, daylight sensors, cacti, etc. to make the parkour more interesting. The theme of "annoying" parkour is also not good, as we want our accepted maps to be fun to play.

I hope to see more submissions from you in the future, and have a great day!