Rejected SuperMarket- Easy

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Owner: EzGirlPvP_X
Helper: BunStop
Theme: SuperMarket
Difficulty: Easy
22 Jumps and 2 CheckPoints
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He Helped a Lot!
 

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Heya, EzGirlPvP_X!

I'm going to be giving your map a "0" for the following reasons: The theme is definitely original and the build has a main focus and is cute and simple. My main issue regards the parkour: it is too difficult for an easy (maybe add another cp as well?), but, the length is good. If you make that those minor changes, I'm sure you'll map will be accepted! Good luck :)
 

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Heya, EzGirlPvP_X!

I'm going to be giving your map a "0" for the following reasons: The theme is definitely original and the build has a main focus and is cute and simple. My main issue regards the parkour: it is too difficult for an easy (maybe add another cp as well?), but, the length is good. If you make that those minor changes, I'm sure you'll map will be accepted! Good luck :)
Hey patty what is the scale on?
 

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Hey
EzGirlPvP_X


First off i love the concept of the idea but the build is a bit bland, its also a bit simple
Some of the jumps also dont really make sense on where to go plus some are unattractive

Overall i feel like you can improve on your execution with a bit of practice!

Have a nice day!

Nick
 

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Hello EzGirlPvP_X

Unfortunately I will be Rejecting this map.
The theme is original, however the build is quite plain and simple, and could be improved.
The parkour is varied, however it was too difficult for an easy map. I would suggest adding more detail to the build and nerfing the parkour, so it is more suited to the easy difficulty.

Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.
 
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