Rejected Suspension Bridge

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Username: Conor2301
Map Name: Suspension Bridge
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Warp Name: /plot v Conor2301 1
Difficulty: Expert
Number of Jumps: 90
Builders: Conor2301, NMCAMANY
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Hello Conor,

I will be putting this map into reviewing. This means that there are aspects of your map that are really great, but there are key pieces of your map that will need to be revised or changed. You will have until October 17th, 2020 to make changes to your map before it is automatically rejected.

The theme is somewhat original, there are other bridge maps but none that look like this, so good job on that! The build is also really nice! It is accurate to what a suspension bridge looks like, and the color choice and cars are a nice touch. Not much else to say about this.

The parkour is what will need revising. The difficulty and length suit an expert map pretty well, but the parkour is a bit confusing in some places because of the strange path it takes. There are also quite a few floating jumps that distract from the build. I would like to see the parkour revised in a way that makes the path more clear, with less floating jumps.

Thank you for submitting this map! When you finish these revisions, please message me on Discord @ Quinny#2316 so that I can take a look and provide feedback to you there. Hope to see the revisions soon!
 

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Hello Conor,

Since I have not heard from you about any changes to this map, it will now be automatically rejected. Feel free to resubmit at any time in the future when changes are made!
 
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