Rejected SwampMonster | Easy

[Uneasilly // Sil]

Username: Sillllllllllllll
Helpers: zScrXm
Map name: SwampMonster
Warp of plot: /plot v Sillllllllllllll 10
Difficulty: Easy
Checkpoints: 2 (not including the one at the start)
Number of jumps: 21
The photos are in the attachments! :mc_111-0::mc_106-0:

 

[k_rissy]

Hello sillllllllllllll and zScrxm,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is slightly unoriginal, as we already have some maps relating to monsters; however, this is executed in a unique way, so good job on that!
The build is the main concern. At first glance, it's hard to see the monster features. I think it would be cool, especially for this theme, if the build was bigger, so you could capture more monster-like features. The use of an island is also kind of repetitive.
The parkour is incorporated with the theme quite nicely, and it fits the difficulty, so good job on that! It does sort of feel cramped together, particularly due to the size of the build.

Thank you for submitting your map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina