Hey Jake,
Sorry to say but I am going to be rejecting this map submission.
I like your concept of the build as its not seen much, but however it still unoriginal as there is 2 maps with these snake like jumps (One being a donator map). The jumps can get confusing as its not always clear where to go, as I found myself I kept going in circles.. This might make it boring for players to do. I also did not understand that random blocks placed at the top leading to the finishing platform as they did not match the theme.
Thank you for submitting a map, I hope to see more in the future!