Rejected Teletobies - Medium (Aloro) and friend

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Welcome to teletobies brothers and sisters on medium. These little rat Towelettes deserved a map for them. the rats are Aloro,fishy1980,heckd, and barkd
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All Jumps are POSSIBLE
some jumps can be a little hard but its still possible.
Made by me on map maker at /plot home carazypumpkin9 11. Go to the left then go forward.
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Hey, I'll be giving this map a +/-1, here's why.
I did enjoy doing the map, though somewhat repetitive at times, and I thought there was variety within the parkour. However, I definitely believe the build could use some work. The Teletubbies look mostly the same and they look somewhat off.

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-1 The build ain't attractive enough and the parkour isn't enough to make up for the build.
 

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Eww another noah map.jk jk.anyway its a +1-1for me since like the theme is great but the build is quite uhh could be improved.
 

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+1 Good build; -1 TELETUBBIES??:eek::confused:
 

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+1 great build!
 

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Hoi Noah,
Sorry to tell you that your map have been rejected.
I'm not a big fan of the build, it's not really attractive like said above. The parkour is not the best thing too, it's a bit repetitive sometimes, and you can skip some parts of your parkour (The green and the yellow one) (The parkour would is also too long and hard for a medium, so it's more a hard).
However, the theme is pretty original and interesting !

Thanks for submitting your map, would be really good to see more maps from you !
 
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