Rejected Terminal - Expert - reworked

[BluePottwal]

Creator: BluePottwal
Helpers: Pineconen, CornelisDeWitt
Difficulty: Expert
ID: -42;93
After the first version was rejected, I would like to submit the reworked map. At first it was a bit empty inside. Also some jumps weren't right for the choosen difficulty. I improved some jumps and reworked the jump and run in the tower at the end. Before there were just ladders and gates... I think its much more enjoyable now:D
Let me know your feedback:D

Thanks

 

[Faudon]

Hello BluePottwal,

Unfortunately, I will be rejecting your map for the following reasons:

The theme of your map is good, although if we compare it to the catalog as a Station, it isn't very original as we already have some Station maps such as PoliceStation, GasStation, TrainStation, and Airplane, which have similar themes to yours.

The build for your map looks good at first glance, but upon looking at certain details, it started getting a bit messy and things were not quite in place. I would recommend you making all the objects inside the terminal a bit more scaled so it looks more realistic.

For the parkour, at first it was varied but then I started noticing some repetitiveness in it which made it feel like a long map and not really enjoyable when doing it. Although almost all the jumps fit the difficulty, I would improve on them. There were some jumps that were a bit too hard for the difficulty chosen.

With the addition of glass panes, now all this part of the map is exploitable, please correct this if you submit this map in the future: https://prnt.sc/smzu48

About the hard jumps, here are some examples of them that could be changed:
https://prnt.sc/smzuyu
https://prnt.sc/smzvcj

Don't let any of this discourage you; instead; use it as feedback and advice to make your map even better!

If you have any questions regarding your map or submissions in general, please contact me on Discord, my name is fau#1734, or start a conversation with me on the forums.

Thanks for submitting a map and I hope to see more maps from you in the future!