Rejected Terraria-Easy

[Hol Ma Beer]

Username: Hol Ma Beer
Map name: Terraria
Plot #: #0355
Plot ID: 128;15
Difficulty: Easy or Medium (I said easy but it could be a medium map)
Jumps: Around 98

I really enjoy playing Terraria and did not find a map to satisfy it, so I decided to make my own. This is my first map and be harsh because I want to build more in the future. If it gets accepted pls enjoy and if not my next map will get accepted.

 

[Elly_x]

Hello Hol Ma Beer,

I regret to inform you that your map is REJECTED.

The THEME of your map is unoriginal, as we already have maps based around floating islands. Before creating a parkour please make sure to check out this template here to see all the maps accepted on the server!

The BUILD of your map is a problem. The map was entirely made up of floating islands with only a bit of detail added. Next time try considering making one main build with lots of depth and detail that goes with your theme.

The PARKOUR fits the length and difficulty of a medium map, so good job on that! Your parkour is lacking variance, only things that are incorporated are regular jumps and ladders. To add more variance, try adding more jumps with unique blocks like pots, water, heads, vines, etc.

Thank you for taking the time to create a map, I hope to see more submissions from you in the future.
If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555
Elly