Rejected The Beehive - Medium

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Cool map! Unfortunately it doesn't fit the requirements nowadays which suggests less floating parkour, more varied jumps, and more detail to the build, such as an actual beehive shape instead of a square and texturing.
I think the theme of beehives is already taken too...try to make an original map next time!

I hope you take this feedback as constructive and use it in the future; remember I'm not a map judge, so my opinion on the map doesn't affect your submission.

Have a good day!
 

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I am not sure if the concept is original. The build is a bit low quality and there is quite alot of floating parkour.. Good job tho
 

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Hello!

I regret to inform you that your map is REJECTED.

The THEME of your map is unoriginal, as we already have maps based around bees/honey. Before creating a parkour please make sure to check out this template here to see all the maps accepted on the server!

The BUILD of your map is a problem. The heart is entirely made up of 3d pixel art which is no longer accepted on ManaCube. Next time try considering making one large main build with lots of depth and detail!

The PARKOUR fits the length and difficulty of a medium map, so good job on that! Your parkour is lacking variance, only things that are incorporated are regular jumps, fences, and slimes. To add more variance, try adding more jumps with unique blocks like pots, water, heads, vines, etc.

Thank you for taking the time to create a map, I hope to see more submissions from you in the future.
If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555
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