Rejected The cycle of minecraft

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Hello! I have some feedback for you.

Though most of the parkour is floating, the blocks used for it are very ugly.
There is no theme or build to this map. Pick an original theme and make a main build that relates to the theme to put the parkour on.
The parkour is repetitive based off of block jumps and ladder jumps. Try to spice the parkour up with vines, daylight sensors, pistons, and more, but make sure it fits the theme, and color scheme of the build, once you've settled on a theme.
The map itself is too easy to be a hard. It's more likely to be a medium if it was to be accepted.

I am not a map judge; these are just opinions.

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Hello Iaxis,

I regret to inform you that your map is REJECTED.

The THEME of your map is unoriginal, as we already have maps based around biomes (GoldMine, Seasons, Biomes) . Before creating a parkour please make sure to check out this template here to see all the maps accepted on the server!

The BUILD of your map is a problem. The map does not have a main build which means that the whole map is floating which is not allowed. Adding a main build to your map will make it look less messy and allow you to add detail and texture which the map is currently lacking a bit.

The PARKOUR fits the length of a medium map and is too easy for a hard map - some jumps are at medium level, but most are at an easy parkour difficulty. Your parkour is lacking variance, only things that are incorporated are regular jumps, and ladders. To add more variance, try adding more jumps with unique blocks like pots, water, heads, vines, etc.

Thank you for taking the time to create a map, I hope to see more submissions from you in the future. [Hayley]
If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555
Have a great day,
Elly
 
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