Rejected The End Parkour

[Ant0802]

Post nice screenshots of the course, don't use shaders.

https://gyazo.com/103727a782ae670f9d2323c0850e3988
https://gyazo.com/0f940f8fdad286296c3451eaca8ac9a4
https://gyazo.com/151ab6dee36919b6ccfa09e588f3bc75


- Tell us what difficulty you think the course is, (we will test it to double check)

I believe my course is easy. There are a total if about 45 jumps. There are slime, no fence/glass panes/iron bars. There are a good amount of quad jumps too.

- Information about who built the course.

I build the course (Ant0802) 100%

 

[PrestonTheSlime]

Hello Ant,
Nice job on the submission I only have one thing to say about next time. Since you have more than one plot make sure to say what plot it is on (this isn't a big deal on this one because it is on your first plot :p) Ex. This is on my plot 3 in creative. IGN: PrestonTheSlime

Things that can be improved
~Now about the course, the end is a common theme on Parkour and is re-used a lot. Make sure you have an awesome theme so the parkour judges don't have to look at the same styles (it bugs them).
~There is an impossible jump located here.

This bugs me the most as it makes me assume you didn't test your map thoroughly before submitting. (I may be wrong)

This only bugs me very slightly but there is a grammatical error here. (Hint: You're*)

Also, there is a skip located here. (Players can jump from the ladders onto the endstone. Just use barriers to fix this.)

What I liked
~I liked the use of iron bars to indicate not to go that direction rather than barriers so they jump that way and die; but this is the most random mushroom tree ever and should probably be changed.

~I liked the use of slimeblocks as-well.

Lastly feel free to contact me through the forums or in game (/mail send PrestonTheSlime) if you have any questions or need any help.
I wish you luck on your submission after you fix that impossible and skip,
~Preston <3

 

[Ant0802]

Fixed:
-Impossible jump.
-Incorrect Grammar

Thanks so much for your feedback!
<3

~Ant0802
[DOUBLEPOST=1445122506][/DOUBLEPOST]Fixed:
-Impossible jump.
-Incorrect Grammar

Thanks so much for your feedback!
<3

~Ant0802
[DOUBLEPOST=1445122556][/DOUBLEPOST]Fixed:
-Impossible jump.
-Incorrect Grammar

Thanks so much for your feedback!
<3

~Ant0802

 

[Angel_Scarz]

There are already about 5 End parkours

 

[Ant0802]

Also sorry about that triple post

My computer was being stupid so when I clicked Post nothing happened so I tried 2 more times and I guess it posted my reply 3 times xD

 

[gogre]

I looked over the map, its a very well made map and I like the different areas of it, but I found some of it quite confusing.. I didnt understand where to go and didnt know if I was going the right way.
Because of this, the map is being rejected. Good luck with your next submission!