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Loading Status...Rejected The Eternal Engine - Medium
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Hey,
i really like the train u made i think it is very well made but a few things will need to change in all likely hood to make this map acceptable. this would be in regards to the parkour at the moment which is a bit repitive in places and doesnt flow as well as it should. please contact me in game or on discord BDO#4442 so i can run you through what the judges are looking for in maps. i can also help you tidy up the surrounding landscape to disguise the world edit you have done to create some depth.
i really like the train u made i think it is very well made but a few things will need to change in all likely hood to make this map acceptable. this would be in regards to the parkour at the moment which is a bit repitive in places and doesnt flow as well as it should. please contact me in game or on discord BDO#4442 so i can run you through what the judges are looking for in maps. i can also help you tidy up the surrounding landscape to disguise the world edit you have done to create some depth.
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Hi there delvepower,
Im sorry to tell ya your map has been rejected.
The THEME of the map is original so good on you for that !
The BUILD is a bit unpolished. It could have some different blocks used for texturing on the outside as well as more detailing on the inside. Providing train details such as seats and even a main area for a conductor would elevate the build a lot.
The PARKOUR is fitting length of a medium but is inconsistent and lacks variation. The parkour needs to fit more of the difficulty of a medium, which you can observe with the recent mediums and the parkour needs more variation in jumps rather than a repeat of jumps over and over again (such as the outside with the same blocks).
Thank you for the submission, I hope to see more from you. Have a wonderful day !
-Ana
Im sorry to tell ya your map has been rejected.
The THEME of the map is original so good on you for that !
The BUILD is a bit unpolished. It could have some different blocks used for texturing on the outside as well as more detailing on the inside. Providing train details such as seats and even a main area for a conductor would elevate the build a lot.
The PARKOUR is fitting length of a medium but is inconsistent and lacks variation. The parkour needs to fit more of the difficulty of a medium, which you can observe with the recent mediums and the parkour needs more variation in jumps rather than a repeat of jumps over and over again (such as the outside with the same blocks).
Thank you for the submission, I hope to see more from you. Have a wonderful day !
-Ana
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