Rejected The Farm - Hard(resubmission V3)

[portal_ninja]

Username: portal_ninja
Map and parkour builder: portal_ninja
Number of jumps: 81
Checkpoints: 5
Difficulty: Hard
plot: /plot v portal_ninja 1

+Made the silo look Nicer
+Mapped the parkour better
+changed the end parkour to be more tidy and fluid

 

[RedHoodieOn]

This is cool, ut there needs to be one central build.

 

[Proteges]

Hey there, portal_ninja

Unfortunately, I will be REJECTING this map submission.
Theme: Firstly I'd like to mention your theme, it isn't really that original as we've got a handful of themes that are pretty similar and close to the build that you've made.

Build: Your build is pretty basic and you use basic terraforming and sapling trees to give life to your build, this makes it seem pretty boring and ruins the immersion a good parkour map should have. As well as the fact that your parkour starts around the middle of the map in a not definitive location which makes it messy and hard to find.

Parkour: Your parkour is pretty unvaried and there aren't really any interesting blocks and parkour jumps incorporated into your map submission parkour, I suggest adding more interesting blocks next time such as flower pots, anvils, cactus, etc. Your parkour as well is in sections which makes it feel pretty repetitive.

Thanks for submitting this map! If you have any questions, feel free to message me here on the forums, in-game, or on Discord.