Rejected The Farm - Hard

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Username: portal_ninja
Map Name: The Farm
Difficulty: Hard
Creator: portal_ninja
plot: /plot v portal_ninja 1
Jumps: 63
Checkpoints: 3
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Hello,

Unfortunately, I will be REJECTING this map submission for the following reasons:

Theme: The theme is not original as there is a map with a farm theme (FarmingFrenzy), however your map unique enough from that map to the point where it is still acceptable. Remember to check the Parkour List before beginning any maps and compare your ideas to pre-existing maps to avoid any duplication issues in the future.
Build: I really like the build - it's accurate, pretty well detailed, and is very cute in general. However, there are a few things I'm confused about. Are these supposed to be cows (https://prnt.sc/up1ydb)? If so, maybe making them look a little more realistic by giving them heads would be a good improvement. Also, I'm not sure why the house has blocks being abducted as there is no UFO above them to abduct them (https://prnt.sc/up25hs), so maybe add another UFO above the house.
Parkour: The length fits the hard difficulty well, but most of the jumps are too easy to include in a hard map. The parkour itself is rather repetitive, being mostly regular blocks and ladders up until the very end. Try to incorporate different types of jumps, using blocks like heads, soul sand, anvils, flower pots, etc. to make your parkour more fun. Finally, this part in the beginning is impossible as you cannot drop down where the arrow says to (https://prnt.sc/up1zg7).

I hope to see more map submissions from you in the future, and have a great day!
 
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