Rejected The Ore - Hard

[Peepersvl]

A "hard" parkour map with 75 jumps. "The Ore" has 5 checkpoints starting at coal and ending with emerald. The map progresses and gets harder as the ores get "rare" The map has a big 16x16 ore block towards the end! I hope its liked, have fun!
Theme: Ore blocks
Jumps: 75
Checkpoints: 5
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Difficulty: Hard
Made by: Peepersvl
Tested by: Candicejdyer

 

[oWinqs]

This is going to have to be a -1 from me. First off, a lot of the blocks and parkour jumps are floating, which makes it seem a little bit messy. Second the build is a little bit unattractive, only being made out of a few blocks, and being overall quite boring to look at. I found the map a little bit too easy for the difficulty, but that might just be me. I'd recommend fixing up the build a little bit, and changing the parkour to focus more around the build, and then I'd consider changing my vote.

 

[sapqhire]

Hello Peepersvl,

Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme isn't original, as minecraft/ore themes are very overused. Please read over this thread https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/ to make sure your map idea is original.
The build isn't very good, as it's just a block of various ores. I understand it may be difficult to have a build to do with the theme that isn't blocky, but the build isn't very attractive.
The parkour has no variation, as you only used normal blocks for jumps. I would recommend experimenting with a larger variety of blocks and items when building jumps, it will make your map overall more enjoyable to complete.
Most of the parkour is floating, try to implement the jumps more into the build, rather than having them floating over the void. Having an excessive number of floating jumps can make the map look quite messy.
The difficulty suits an easy map, and the length suits a hard map.

Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.