Rejected The Road - Medium course

[LordShrine]

Map Title: The Road

Map Creators/username: LordShrine & szhdani

Tested: Beci_

Difficulty: Medium

Plot ID: 67;106

Number of Jumps: 60

Took a lot of time on this map, the whole map is like an adventure through the road while cars, trains, and trucks are going. The gameplay is smooth. Hope you enjoy it!

Images of the map:

http://imgur.com/a/XeSb6l2

 

[Proteges]

Hey there, LordShrine

Unfortunately, I will be REJECTING this map submission.
Theme: For your theme, I'm unfortunately going to classify this as unoriginal, we've already got plenty of parkour/adventure maps on manacube and a lot of maps that involve, cars/road parkour maps sadly.

Build: Your build is honestly pretty basic, I can definitely see that you put some effort into it but sadly it's just not really that detailed and nothing that sets it apart from other builds.

Parkour: Your parkour is not really that original and is unvaried. You don't really use that many interesting jumps/blocks and successfully incorporate them into your parkour map. I suggest adding more interesting jumps in the future such as anvil jumps, chest/enchantment table jumps, flower pot jumps, etc.

Thanks for submitting this map! If you have any questions, feel free to message me here on the forums, in-game, or on Discord.