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Loading Status...Rejected The Tower Eye, Hard->Expert
- Thread starter Khadras
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Hello,
Unfortunately, your map submission is being REJECTED. Here is my input:
Theme: The theme is not original as we already have multiple Tower-themed maps. Be sure to check the Parkour List before building to make sure your map is original.
Build: The build was very plain and boring - try to incorporate more block variety/detailing into your build. It also didn't make much sense as I'm not quite sure what the whole thing in the middle of the tower was supposed to be - the lighting was pretty limited inside and there wasn't really an inner build.
Parkour: The parkour was very repetitive and boring as most of the map was the same jump over and over again - try to keep your parkour varied in block and jump technique to keep it interesting (for example, use water, flower pots, lily pads, cocoa beans, anvils, cacti, vines, etc.) There were also some impossible jumps on your map (https://prnt.sc/vcac9q) - test your parkour in 1.8.9 to confirm everything is possible before submitting. Also, these single iron bars are not allowed on maps as they are different in different versions (https://prnt.sc/vcad3b). This map was the proper difficulty for a HARD map, but was the length of an EXPERT - hards should be around 60-80 jumps and experts 80-100.
I hope to see more submissions from you in the future, and have a great day!
Unfortunately, your map submission is being REJECTED. Here is my input:
Theme: The theme is not original as we already have multiple Tower-themed maps. Be sure to check the Parkour List before building to make sure your map is original.
Build: The build was very plain and boring - try to incorporate more block variety/detailing into your build. It also didn't make much sense as I'm not quite sure what the whole thing in the middle of the tower was supposed to be - the lighting was pretty limited inside and there wasn't really an inner build.
Parkour: The parkour was very repetitive and boring as most of the map was the same jump over and over again - try to keep your parkour varied in block and jump technique to keep it interesting (for example, use water, flower pots, lily pads, cocoa beans, anvils, cacti, vines, etc.) There were also some impossible jumps on your map (https://prnt.sc/vcac9q) - test your parkour in 1.8.9 to confirm everything is possible before submitting. Also, these single iron bars are not allowed on maps as they are different in different versions (https://prnt.sc/vcad3b). This map was the proper difficulty for a HARD map, but was the length of an EXPERT - hards should be around 60-80 jumps and experts 80-100.
I hope to see more submissions from you in the future, and have a great day!
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