Hoi oSilly,
Sorry to tell you that your map have been rejected.
The theme is.. interesting ? I have no idea what it is so I don't really have a lot to say here. The build is not really good, it's pretty plain and unattractive. The parkour could be better, it's a bit varied, but still think it's slightly repetitive, I also think the map is a bit confusing some times (The first ladder part or the slime for example).
Thanks for submitting your map, would be really good to see more maps from you !