Rejected TheMarionette - Expert

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Build isnt the best, and the parkour is boring
 

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ik it looks distusgting at least i learnt something and that is im bad at building circular
 

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Hello FireWolf1985,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is original; we do have FNAF maps but none of this exact type.
The build is a bit plain. More details/texturing could be added to the box. The face/body also looks quite flat, almost resembling 3D pixel art.
The parkour is a bit repetitive with the same 2-3 types of jumps, so make sure you incorporate different jump styles throughout your entire map! The difficulty is also inconsistent; overall it feels too easy in a lot of places.
Make sure you check out these threads made by community judges/mappers to help with your parkour:

https://manacube.com/threads/basics-nerfing-buffing-pk-general-tips.78981/
https://manacube.com/threads/basics-parkour-variance-and-self-constraint.78459/
https://manacube.com/threads/basics-show-dont-tell-how-to-path-good-signage-and-directions.78219/

Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
 
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