Rejected Time // Medium

[Dion12]

Theme: Time is ticking faster and faster you have to be quick for the time

Map Name: Time
Plot: /plot home Dion12
Difficulty: Medium
Jumps: 83
Checkpoint: 3

https://gyazo.com/4897bd69d4eaec31812a0c92af2226ac

Hope you Enjoy

 

[ynna]

jumps
I didn't really like the jumps. they weren't varied and had the same head jumps everywhere. maybe you could change some jumps and make it varied.

build/decorations
the heads were cute with the clocks and all, but I think you could make the clock better. plus, there were holes in the clock everywhere, and I think you should change that.

overall
I give this a -.5 I didn't like the build and the jumps. good luck!

 

[Aloro]

Hey, I am sorry but I will be rejecting this map submission.
The map is kind of basic and to be reminds me of 3D Pixel Art. As for the jumps I feel like they were just the same one over and over for the most part, and it also felt quite long. If you really expanded upon this idea I feel like it would be really good.

Thanks for this submission, hope to see more in the future!