Rejected Tomato ~ Hard

[Nqtsu__]

Username: Nqtsu__ , PinkUsh , UniUnii
Map Name: Tomato
Warp: ./plot home Nqtsu__ 1
Jumps: 72
Checkpoint: 9
Difficulty - Hard

 

[WICKEDMagma]

Theme: 10/10
Original. No tomato themed maps yet
Build 8/10
Considering a tomato is basically just a red ball with green hair, you did a good job making the build as authentic as possible with the shape, personification, and block choices
Parkour 10/10
Good variety. Fits the difficulty

+1

 

[k_rissy]

Hello Nqtsu__,

Your map will now be marked as ongoing; I have reviewed your map and it will now be discussed among map judges. This may take time, so please be patient.

 

[k_rissy]

Hello Nqtsu__,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is original, well done there.
The build is one of the concerns. The outside is accurate; however, try to add some more detail on the inside as it looks quite bland.
The parkour is a bit repetitive, so make sure you have different types of jumps throughout. The difficulty of your map also doesn't flow very well. Please read these community-made articles for tips on improving your map:
https://manacube.com/threads/basics-parkour-variance-and-self-constraint.78459/
https://manacube.com/threads/basics-show-dont-tell-how-to-path-good-signage-and-directions.78219/
https://manacube.com/threads/basics-nerfing-buffing-pk-general-tips.78981/

Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!