Hello,
Unfortunately your map has been rejected.
Your theme is unoriginal as we already have maps based on torches.
The build itself is lacking depth and detail. Build a main island alongside a large, main build so you can add the depth this map is currently missing and path the parkour around that, making the map look less messy.
The parkour itself is quite repetitive and lacks in variation. To add more variation, use blocks such as water, slime, trapdoors, heads etc so you can space out your variation more. There is one jump at the start (the water jump) which is impossible in 1.8.9. Please ensure that all jumps are possible in 1.8.9.
We hope to see more maps from you in the future.
Have a wonderful day!