Hello MagicMysteryGuy,
I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is original, as we don't have any maps with this theme, so good job on that!
The build has more detail from your previous submission, which is great! It is still a bit plain, but considering that there isn't much variety in the real thing, this is okay.
The parkour is the main concern. It is still floating quite a bit throughout, which makes it appear messy. There is a bit more variety, which is great! It is also a bit confusing in certain places as to where to go, and I feel that some of the jumps were a bit challenging for the medium difficulty. The length is good for the difficulty, however.
Thank you for submitting your map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina