Rejected Total Wipeout - Medium

[Woolmen07]

Plot ID: /plot v Woolmen07 or /plot v 93;101
Builder: Woolmen07
Plot Difficulty: Normal
Map Name: Total Wipeout

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[IPattyI]

Hey Woolmen07,

Unfortunately, I will be REJECTING this map submission.

• Theme: As we already have a Wipeout-themed map currently on our server, this is a pretty unoriginally themed map submission. I recommend that you look at our list of previously used maps/themes as to prevent such things in the future: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lZKQZMgGev6fXyhZ8nCPkTzNIj0yOjXjUTDvfzKNzl4/edit .
• Build: Personally, I don't think the build is very good. Of course, the first issue is the similarity in build intention between this map and our "Wipeout" map. Besides that, the build itself is very plain and lacking as it's mostly just floating parkour. There isn't much "build" to it. You have to remember that although parkour is important to a map submission, so is the build. You create a build that conveys your theme properly and then integrate your parkour into it.
• Parkour: The parkour fit the medium difficulty in both length and difficulty, although it was on the shorter side of things. The only issue I had with it was the repetitive nature of it. I'm sure you can see how many times you repeated a certain type of jump. Be it the ice segments, wool segments, or ladder segment. These are all just the same thing being done over and over again, proving to make the parkour very unenjoyable. Be more creative with your parkour's composition!

I hope you take these criticisms into consideration when submitting maps in the future, good luck