Hoi quinn,
Sorry to tell you that your map have been rejected.
The theme is pretty good and original, same for the build, it's pretty good and attractive (I just don't like the outside, but it's only my opinion). The problem is the parkour. It's really repetitive, confusing because of the amount of barrier (Try to reduce the number with adding some other blocks please), and a bit hard for a medium (The cross neo for example).
You can resubmit your map if you want, if you've patched the negative points, I will be happy to accept your map !
Thanks for submitting your map, would be really good to see more maps from you !