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Hello dear parkourist! My name is Tenshi and Im going to leave you some tips and comments about your parkour.
I will also state wiether or not I think it should be accepted, rejected, or reviewed.
Firstly, Theme.
I feel that this theme is clear, As you stated it as a Train Parkour. The lack of detail for these trains might be in questioning. Also, The theme should include colors that are pleasing to the eye as well!
For example, A sponge and bedrock do not please the eye. An oak leave and a stone block, are pleasing.
Secondly, Parkour.
View this thread here for help with jumps: http://www.minecraftforum.net/forum...tive-mode/369499-parkour-creation-tips-tricks
Thirdly, Rank.
This parkour would be ranked medium, because of the amount of jumps.
And Lastly, My comment.
This parkour should be denied. As to which, There are several reasons.
Reasons Why:
- Trains themselves
- Some of the jumps can be glitched with /speed
I suggest editing this course, And submitting it again at a later time.
Thank you for submitting a parkour, Remember that this is not a final decision. The final decision will be made by Pokezelda, or Ham562. I'll let my fellow friends
and parkour map makers, @Nixi and @Pud96 give you some comments.
Thank you for your time. If this parkour is accepted/rejected, Remember that you can always submit another parkour, at another time.
~Tenshi
I will also state wiether or not I think it should be accepted, rejected, or reviewed.
Firstly, Theme.
I feel that this theme is clear, As you stated it as a Train Parkour. The lack of detail for these trains might be in questioning. Also, The theme should include colors that are pleasing to the eye as well!
For example, A sponge and bedrock do not please the eye. An oak leave and a stone block, are pleasing.
Secondly, Parkour.
View this thread here for help with jumps: http://www.minecraftforum.net/forum...tive-mode/369499-parkour-creation-tips-tricks
Thirdly, Rank.
This parkour would be ranked medium, because of the amount of jumps.
And Lastly, My comment.
This parkour should be denied. As to which, There are several reasons.
Reasons Why:
- Trains themselves
- Some of the jumps can be glitched with /speed
I suggest editing this course, And submitting it again at a later time.
Thank you for submitting a parkour, Remember that this is not a final decision. The final decision will be made by Pokezelda, or Ham562. I'll let my fellow friends
and parkour map makers, @Nixi and @Pud96 give you some comments.
Thank you for your time. If this parkour is accepted/rejected, Remember that you can always submit another parkour, at another time.
~Tenshi
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