Rejected Train Station - Medium

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Train Station - Medium
38 jumps - 2 checkpoints
Made by Pulty, Train and cab design taken from CraftyFoxe
/plot v Pulty 2

 

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Hello Pulty,

Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme is good, there are a couple of maps related to trains, however no specific train station related maps.
The build isn't bad. The interior is well build and has nice details, however the exterior is quite unattractive. I'm not sure how you would want to change it, but just having the flat stone and grass wall isn't very attractive.
The parkour is varied which is good. You used a nice variety of blocks and items to create original and enjoyable jumps.
I found the parkour quite confusing in multiple places. There were some sections that you did explain quite well where to go, but there were still a few sections where I found it quite easy to get lost, especially right at the start and in the second half.
I feel like some of the parkour suits an easy/medium map, but some jumps would be more suited to a hard map. Try to keep the difficulty consistent throughout the map.
The length is good for a medium map.

Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.
 
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