Rejected tree parkour!

[chris bloom]

parkour map: tree parkour
Jumps: 144
Checkpoints: 7 (not including the starting one)
made by: sirswagsalot57
where: minevast creative server
visit it: /plot visit sirswagsalot57
diffuculty: hard/maybe expert

sorry about the tree i tried ;)

 

[DaTNTBoy]

Hello! I am giving feedback on your parkour. (In any way, sorry if this hurts your feelings).
Firstly, I am going to give feedback on the jumps and checkpoints.
The checkpoints are fine, they are in the right place.
The jumps, as I can see you added barrier parkour. Now since the parkour gamemode is adventure mode, it will be impossible to see where the barriers are. Now I can see you added torches with the other ones, and can you put the torches on the other barriers?
And the rest of the jumps are fine to me.
Secondly, I think the difficulty should be hard.
Thirdly, let me say a few things about the detail of the parkour.
This parkour kind of lacks in detail. I think you need to add more detail , making the parkour more interesting.
Now as I can see this is your first parkour, and this is a good start.
I don't think this should be added to the parkour section.
I think so because it's just not enough effort and detail to make it to the server.
However, this parkour was fun and challenging, but the main thing I need you to work on is detail.
Best of luck.
- DaTNTBoy

(I am not a map judge, this is feedback and not a true decision. I just like giving feedback on parkours :))

 

[chris bloom]

Hello! I am giving feedback on your parkour. (In any way, sorry if this hurts your feelings).
Firstly, I am going to give feedback on the jumps and checkpoints.
The checkpoints are fine, they are in the right place.
The jumps, as I can see you added barrier parkour. Now since the parkour gamemode is adventure mode, it will be impossible to see where the barriers are. Now I can see you added torches with the other ones, and can you put the torches on the other barriers?
And the rest of the jumps are fine to me.
Secondly, I think the difficulty should be hard.
Thirdly, let me say a few things about the detail of the parkour.
This parkour kind of lacks in detail. I think you need to add more detail , making the parkour more interesting.
Now as I can see this is your first parkour, and this is a good start.
I don't think this should be added to the parkour section.
I think so because it's just not enough effort and detail to make it to the server.
However, this parkour was fun and challenging, but the main thing I need you to work on is detail.
Best of luck.
- DaTNTBoy

(I am not a map judge, this is feedback and not a true decision. I just like giving feedback on parkours :))

thanks for your feedback!
[DOUBLEPOST=1448492368,1448491626][/DOUBLEPOST]fixed the barrier jumps!

 

[gogre]

Denied - Cannot find parkour