Hi There Nozomi5,
I'm sorry to tell you that your map has been rejected
Your theme is original so good job on that!
The build is accurate to to the theme but would look more complete if it matched the environment of the rock. For example you could use some red sand with some dead bush. The parkour is the main issue. It's the right length for an easy so good job on that!
The parkour itself was too easy and repetitive. I would suggest using a variety of jumps that blend in with the build itself. Use more variation such as lava, glass panes, heads, daylight sensors, piston heads/bases, cocoa beans, ice, soul sand, etc to add more variation. Your map was also lacking a finish plate and the slime jump at the end was easily skippable. [Sophia]
We hope to see more maps from you in the future
Have a wonderful day/night
-Hayley