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IPattyI

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Hey fl4me444,

Unfortunately, I will be REJECTING this map submission.
  • Theme: In my mind, there is no theme present on this map as I do not believe solely parkour-themed maps are original. Your map has to be themed after something, it can't just be after jumps.
  • Build: As with the lack of a theme, there is also a lack of a build. Your map is just jumps, there's no build. That is unacceptable as the parkour should serve to complement your build. You can't just omit the build portion and only have jumps.
  • Parkour: The parkour was both too long and too easy for the medium difficulty. I recommend that you cut down on the jumps by a lot and buff the map so that it fits the medium difficulty. Furthermore, the parkour was also incredibly boring to do as almost the entirety of it was just block to block jumps of varying distance. You need to use a wider variety of blocks and especially jumps so that your parkour is fun to do.
I hope you take these criticisms into consideration when submitting maps in the future, good luck!
 
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