Hello xMakoto,
I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
From your previous submission, the theme and build are still original and well done, respectively.
The parkour is the main concern. While the length is now good for the hard difficulty, is is still a bit too easy. There also is still not enough block variety, and some of the jumps are hard to see because of the black wool/black carpet/black glass combinations. These would have to be addressed in order for your map to be accepted.
Thank you for submitting your map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina